Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
communities of different nations have been polarized almost equally into two parts. A group of community favours that for many countries important source of revenue is tourism. Nevertheless handfuls of people go against it. I personally favours the individual who welcome the central idea and there are plentiful reasons to justify my view point.
there are various things which countries receive from foreigners. there are several reasons why countries promote tourism. One of them is that they are source of foreign currency. The topmost is tourist explore remote locations which help to develop these regions.it can be argued that tourist like to interact with local culture, Languages and beliefs which aid to them for spread in world. it should also be taken into account that tourist share their own culture, customs with local people.Thus it improves knowledge of local about world and help them to adopt beneficial things.
At the flip side of coin, there are handfuls of demerits which force people to have a second. Secondly, sometime foreigners visit countries for crime purpose like smuggling.Thus, there are concerns about drugs spread in youth which spoil their life.
All in All,when all specific reasons and relevant examples are consider and evaluated. I personally subscribe the proposition that tourism is a great source of income for many nations.
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- Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries but its disadvantages should not be overlooked To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries but its disadvantages should not be overlooked To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people believe that increasing tourism is a source of income for many nations but others say that their disadvantages not be overlooked To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries but its disadvantages should not be overlooked To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34562211982 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61219197238 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.993609059 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2307692308 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154634775464 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598930861884 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753114432767 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836731252506 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437040485214 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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