Tourism has been a good source of revenue in many countries and government should promote the industry. Do you agree or disagree?
In the recent decades, there are some sectors which can earn great profit for countries, one of them is the tourism industry that authorities should be advertised to some extent. I personally agree with the previously mentioned statement, which I will elaborate here.
To begin with, it is true that enhancing tourist destinations would have major drawbacks, especially to conserving water resources It is because most of tourism industry generally overuse water resources for hotels, swimming pools, and personal needs. It might also be said that, tourism objects contribute bankcruptcy to people’s local business. A further issue related to the market condition, if many multinationals and internationals businesses dominate these areas, they not only threat small corporation but also tend to prompt local economy melt-down.
On the other hand, perhaps, the most benefits of promoting recreational areas is that maintaning of conservational tourism object. If the traveller used public facilities and paid taxes, those funds would properly be allocated to regular maintenance of such areas. In addition, profit of tourism sector might be developed and creates job fields. This means bolstering small and niche business has also a domino effects on both local suppliers and employees. For instance, people can sell various products such as clothings, accessories, and souvenirs.
To conclude, it seems reasonable for the authorities to advertise the tourism sector which brings a financial contribution in the effort to preserve tourist destinations and increase indigenous income. This is as long as the excessive use of water resources could be minimised by hospitality industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e excessive use of water resources could be minimised by hospitality industries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66141732283 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07432673979 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661417322835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3790068766 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0995637831974 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335697324665 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293918403244 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593921424983 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264745712743 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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