Most countries want to improve standard of living through economic development, however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the majority of nations which intend to encourage economic growth resulting in improving living standard. However, other claim that, there are detrimental consequences which will threat such as losing social value. This issue, personally, I believe would bring considerable merits for several reason which I will elucidate more below.
Perhaps, in my standpoint, increasing economic income at household significantly influence human resources which will contribute modernization and progression at a nation. In connection with welfare and prosperity enhancement, many parents allocate amount of dollar to educate their children in international curriculum determining children talent. Reportedly, many parents of South Korean prioritize their children to deliver not only formal education but also additional class which will sharpening children’ core ability. Furthermore, this nation could fund sophisticated health care which would increase public health. Research and instrument of medicine require government funding which will produce expert medical staff. Therefore, the accessibility of health system could contribute public satisfaction to be more respect for government policies.
On the other hand, it seems to me that, the negative side of this could induce incremental living cost inflicting the lower marriage commitment at productive ages picturised by developed countries. Seemingly, many new-spouses decide to marriage proscationate caused by financial consideration resulting in depopulation at nations. Moreover, this could trigger social status based on how much they earn. Instead of familiar with in their vicinity, they prefer spending their time with working along days to save much money to gathering with their surrounding.
In conclusion, while the raising living standard seem drawback to some extent. I would contradict that the beneficial of this are more significant. This include moving nation developments and lessen the prevalence of widespread diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...eve would bring considerable merits for several reason which I will elucidate more below. P...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09540636042 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0473175359 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681978798587 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4475522054 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986549103044 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349552860351 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497257347265 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690892666955 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374426290823 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.8 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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