Tourism has negative impact on certain destinations some people believe that particular tourists are to be blamed for that discuss the specific negative impact in your country and suggest solutions

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Tourism has negative impact on certain destinations some people believe that particular tourists are to be blamed for that discuss the specific negative impact in your country and suggest solutions.

Nowadays, tourism is one of the important thing which help to increased economy of the country. However, it has some negative impacts on the tourist attracting place because of unaware and irresponsible tourists. This essay examines negative impacts on different destinations by tourist along with some possible solution to curb this problem.
To embark with, tourism has one major negative impact on tourist destinations. Firstly, India is popular for historical places and temples so, every year thousand of people come there. But, the number of travellers are damage the infrastructure of these places by their activities. To epitomize, people are commonly do vandalism on the walls of many temples and historical places. These activities spoil the beauty of these momanents and structure.

In addition to this, it also affected the natural habits. The adventure and eco tourism on it peak in India. Tourist like to spent the vacations in the lap of nature as well as in hill stations or on beaches and they prefer to do adventures sports in these places. As a result, there are rapidly increase overall environment degradation and polluted both air and water. Because, they put garbage on these places. And, the people of these places started to cut trees to give the better facilities and infrastructure for travellers.
However, it has some proper solutions to control this problem. The government should make the rule and regulations on these places. And, should take the consulting those people are do not aware about these destinations.
In conclusion, tourism has merits as well as demerits for the nations. But, it is important to sort out the problem because, it became a major problem of the nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16845878136 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80207892548 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0900806617 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8947368421 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6842105263 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196393467756 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577547852222 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781540469008 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107540835658 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852400724646 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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