Tourism is an important industry which has developed the economies of countries in many parts of the world. What effect has tourism had on local communities?
In this globalisation, the economy of a country surely has a major role in its country's development. Tourism is one of the biggest influencer to the economy system as it supports and provides income to the country.
As the country is getting advanced, the infrastructure is certainly developing, and many facilities is also installed. Therefore, it may lead tourists from abroad to come and visit a country. Thus, spending more money for the trip and benefits the country's economy system. When tourists visit a country, they do not only spend for the accommodations and entertainment, but also transportation, culinary, etc. Therefore, the tourism industry is really beneficial and highly affects the economy system.
Apart from the economy, having tourists from different parts of the world tend to influence the local communities such in the trends, and lifestyle. As more tourists come, the more culture a country will be exposed, and it will affect the local communities. However, it might not always be positive, negative effects can also harm the society, such as the western lifestyles that might oppose the traditional beliefs.
To conclude, the tourism industry plays a big role in the advancement of a country whether it is the economy or even the lifestyle to the local communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23444976077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04389715006 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55023923445 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9022290313 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4545454545 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257162161699 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930095084443 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693157685182 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161181695716 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451778760579 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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