Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Would a single currency cause any problems?
The economy of any particular state or country depend on the trade and the currency rate.Any state which has low economy can be referred as a backward state which has no trade of any goods.I totally agree with the single currency which has to be implemented globally and can make travel and trade easier.However they are few advantages and disadvantages in this step.
On one hand,Infact every time a person needs to travel to any country he has to exchange currency and even if you are selling some good or services there has to be exchange rate and it varies with different price amount such as 1 dollar is equal to 70 indian rupees and 1 Kuwait dinar is equal to 233 indian rupees so clearly observed that every country has different economy rate.Probably this is one of the reasons why people travel and settle to other countries where the dollar rate has a low value which reduces their expenses.However if the same currency followed globally then it would be easier for everyone to sell and buy goods and no difficulties faced when travelling.The price of particular goods also will be same such as a bag costs 50 dollars and in indian rupees it costs 3000.The taxes would be also be the same as there is no need of exchange in currency.
On the other hand,there might be some disadvantages such as there won't be any profits for any goods.The rate of production would have no value such as a country has insufficient spices produced and another country has higher vegetables produced.If there is the same currency over all the trade doesn't negotiate and no profit is valued.Then the complete economy globally is difficult to calculate and exchange rate falls down gradually.There won't be any international exports or imports as the price rate doesn't alternatively.These are the major drawbacks when currency is followed the same around globally.
In the conclusion,i would say that it is not a better idea though it could benefit the travels and trade the standard economy will gradually decrease and there can't be any difference between the most developed country with the least developed as the rate of currency remains same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87123287671 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85708109201 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465753424658 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 20.2975951904 448% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 231.221755032 49.4020404114 468% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 444.5 106.682146367 417% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.25 20.7667163134 439% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28765480857 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195923074533 0.084324248473 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437438929663 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195923074533 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437438929663 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.1 13.0946893788 360% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.89 50.2224549098 -42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 11.3001002004 343% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.15 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 10.1190380762 379% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 39.0 10.7795591182 362% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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