Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools
In the summary,the substantial way of learning between boys and girls differently depending upon the way of understanding the concept.Like for example,Boys typically understand just by reading from book however the girls usually by-heart line to line rather than thinking logically.
On one hand,people think that as the process of learning is varied from boys to girls the single-sex education is the best rather than co-education in order to help the students succeed.According to me,this is not a great idea as the communication between boys and girls will never be substantial and this is a clear gender bias differentiation which is unacceptable.However There are many advantages and disadvantages of such system.Let's begin with advantages like there are some restrictions in a co-education as boys should respect girls,No matter whoever does the mistake the blame would be on boys as girls are too sensitive,girls can't be so open to talk or communicate with other girls when boys are seated between them.If there is only a single system for each they can enjoy their freedom and the same applied to boys they don't really have to worry about any girl complaining about their behaviour.There is a chance that children get attracted on things like love and infatuation which can impact on their career although there is not such thing entertained if there is only single-sex education.
On the other hand,there are few disadvantages like the communication between a boy and girl has to be nurtured right from a young age if they are separated Later,in future even when they are employed they face difficulties in communicating.The more educated you become less morals will be learned in such type.They develop inferiority complex when put in such type of education.Many results show that students who have studied in co-education are far successful in life.
In the conclusion,I would say if a child has to be all rounder with good skills,morals and ethics and develop good communication and effective way of learning then there should be no single-sex education rather everyone should only prefer educating both equally with equal importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, then, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23768115942 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28639158809 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 86.0 20.2975951904 424% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 337.266956579 49.4020404114 683% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 451.75 106.682146367 423% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.25 20.7667163134 415% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263075839162 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148987814881 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841890673583 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148987814881 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841890673583 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.4 13.0946893788 354% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.81 50.2224549098 -31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 11.3001002004 326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.33 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.4 10.1190380762 360% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 37.0 10.7795591182 343% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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