Traditional medicine such as acupuncture and herbal remedies is very popular in some countries Those who practise traditional medicine claim that it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health Do you agree or disagree with this view

Traditional medicine using methods such as acupuncture and herbal remedies is widely used in some countries. Some doctors who practise traditional medicine believe that it is more successful than modern medicine in developing good health. I completely agree with this statement.

Nowadays, Traditional medication is the purest form of remedy to any disease and has been popular since a very long time. Many doctors suggest it as the best form of cure. As according to a survey in comparison to the modern-day medicine that is termed as the allopathy, the ancient methods are considered the remedies with a zero side effects. With this zero-side effect, the sustainability of the medicines becomes the longest and the patient can have a zero percent chances of its effects than its cure.

Moreover, the traditional medicinal techniques such as acupuncture and herbal treatment are the remedies that can be used for backaches and allergies or viruses respectively. Patients also give a positive response to these treatments. In result, they feel a lot relief from their respective problems and hence getting a permanent solution to their illness. But when we look out for the modern-day medicines, they may have unknown effects. There can be unknown side effects which may be non-beneficial to a person. With these people should trust opinions of a qualified doctor as some of them face a difficulty after taking them so. This can lead to an illness getting worse without a treatment from a doctor.

In order to conclude, the traditional methods are more preferred by the people and doctors who practise them because they suggest that it is far more better than allopathy and homeopathy that are also known as modern day medicine.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1554770318 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84662696807 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6429623042 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324099061307 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995307798846 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102412270465 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219961303831 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14538504761 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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