Traditional medicine, such as acupuncture and herbal remedies, is very popular in some countries. Those who practise traditional medicine claim that it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health.
Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
There are some countries, where traditional medicine has deep roots and has been used to treat different diseases since long time ago. According to adepts of traditional methods of treatment, modern medicine concedes to traditional one in terms of efficiency and harmlessness. I can’t agree with this point of view and my position will be explained in this essay.
Firstly, traditional ways of treatment might not be as effective as synthetic remedies are, which means lost time for a patient. It could work for light problems, while for severe sicknesses this could mean lower chances to recover. For example, cancer progresses really fast and every week without proven treatment could mean a patient’s life.
Secondly, as traditional medicine often does not require official recipes, the uncontrollable usage could be a case. This could lead to undesired results for a patient and could even worsen the physical condition of a person. For example, taking some herbs, like mint, could be highly risky for a pregnant woman and her fetus, that’s why taking any remedies should be strictly under specialist’s control.
It should be said that traditional medicine proves to be a trustworthy solution for some people, providing slow, but gentle impact on an organism. Often it seems to be cheaper as well, which could be compensated by the extended duration and need to replenish the stock of pills. But when it comes to a serious problem, in many cases only modern medicine could help to solve the health issue.
To summarise, it could be concluded that despite some benefits of the traditional approach in medicine, when it comes to a need for a proven effect, the scientific approach should be preferred. I believe, in the future, the importance of modern medicine would probably become even higher due to continious improvement by scientists and medics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... organism. Often it seems to be cheaper as well, which could be compensated by the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20462046205 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89364611068 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5974881158 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179182055478 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749090693595 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569400414315 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119286975469 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780623144472 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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