transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today what are the causes of this problem and how could the situation be improved

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transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. what are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

It is true that the deferment of transportation vehicles and the time of long trips have been becoming a extensive tendency all over the world in this contemporary society. There are a number of reasons behind the mentioned phenomenon, and several solutions should be adopted by governments to improve the situation.

There are two primary reasons why this issue occurs constantly in the parts of some contries. The initial factor for the explanation is in terms of the decrease of the amount of visitors recently. To be more precise, for the most part community's lives are continuously in the path of the improvement today, which automatically leads to the high demand of the people's entertainment and leisure activities. Another point worth noting is most post-graduated students always apply their academic transcript into the companies with the hope of being received to work in the decent positions, and it is the norm that many of them are likely not desire to have a job such as servicer, driver. Therefore, the lack of people in these jobs might take the time of working longer to keep up with the work load, and may causes the given problem.

Since such issue is serious, several measures could be taken to alleviate this problem. To begin with, it is advisably essential to encourage investment in better infrastructure, take the action of giving subsidy as example. Furthermore, the government should immediately take steps to address this trouble by promoting the appeal to citizens not to use the public vehicles usually and bolstering the use of people's private means of transport.

In conclusion, it is obviously that there are various reasons for public transports postponing and the schedule of long travel distances, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e time of long trips have been becoming a extensive tendency all over the world i...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...tically leads to the high demand of the peoples entertainment and leisure activities. A...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...refore, the lack of people in these jobs might take the time of working longer to...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08474576271 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88445695541 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4894490258 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230463964995 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755239055933 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524882386371 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136205026623 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268841871895 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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