Is travelling is good for individual
Some of us must have heard someone say: "Besides classroom hours, travel is the most effective way to receive life lessons." There are people who spend almost half of their lives traveling all over the world. Some people say that travel is actually an unnecessary thing for the individual. However, I do not think so and I personally believe that travel plays an essential part in life because it brings a number of significant benefits to each individual for a number of reasons.
One of the significant benefits of travel is that it gives individuals a chance to experience reality. During the journey, we will have the opportunity to experience life in many different ways. We can learn about the culture of the region through books, newspapers, and the internet, but only travel can help us to clearly engrave those things. We will gain in sight the beautiful landscapes, listen to the local voices, and better understand the lifestyle and geographical position of each region. These hands-on experiences are the benefits of traveling that you wouldn't be able to get from just staying at home. Another benefit of traveling is that it enhances our ability to adapt to any situation. Through the specific situations that we face such as change of weather, broken car, forgetting things, getting lost, poor service quality of the place where we stay, bad attitude of service staff, etc. Through those unexpected misfortunes, they will practice their ability to improvise in all situations and increase their living capital to be more stable with all uncertainties on the road of life.
Some argue that traveling is a waste of money. This is because travelers have to spend quite a lot of money to pay for fares, food and accommodation services, etc., which not everyone can afford, especially in this situation. The state of the economy has just recovered from the current Covid-19 pandemic. However, I personally think this is not a big deal. We can choose to travel in low seasons or on weekdays, these times will usually have few tourists, so the cost of services will be much cheaper. In addition, we can also go on tours with companies because such trips are usually not expensive. Moreover, following such a group, we will have the opportunity to get to know and make friends with many people of all ages. In addition, during that trip, there will be a guide so we will not get lost and we can be in safe conditions compared to traveling alone.
In summary, traveling has its own advantages and disadvantages but I believe that the advantages outweigh the other. It brings valuable knowledge and experiences to each individual that we would not be able to get when we did not go to experience. Personally, I believe that travel is always a beautiful hobby for those who are "moving" to explore new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 481.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89604989605 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83264319365 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 750.6 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9153448967 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.045454545 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8636363636 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219318523744 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714388421815 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687423165613 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159744353793 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619914181154 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.