Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think student only need to get primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary. What's your opinion?
In this highly sophisticated scenario, an upsurging the number of people cannot find jobs in most of the countries. Most of the individuals hold the opinion that primary education is sufficient however, others opine that secondary is a mandatory.I firmly believe that basic studay is not only essential but also another education should not be undermined.
Thereare multifarious benefits of primary education according to the some people which can be clearly seen that if people get only basic level of education.Firstly, in the earlier age getting jobs by them.Undoubtedly, the competition is increasing day by day and there are more and more job seekers. Definitely, no matter what level of education a person receives he and she has go to find job finally facing some competation Furthermore, practical techniques does not provided for factory works by the schools hence. There is no matter people get higher education than primary courses.
On the other hand, secondary education is a important part of everyone's life because it gives great deal of opportunities to people for finding the job. As now a days competition touched the peak point in every field and if a person become a more qualified then any kinds of issues does not seen by his and he is easily go through the process.Second of all, some of them may be set up their own business with the help of their high skills.
In crux, primary education is a enough for some kinds of work whereas, I believe that masses obtain secondary education before they go to work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94186046512 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9592128495 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9718498883 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.375 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.75 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242194379916 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110599814858 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631189197477 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138703117129 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580140333872 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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