Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? What solutions can you suggest?
Since the beginning of the 21st century, the entire world’s community has been suffering from various employability difficulties. An opinion exists that widespread of joblessness is one of the most essential challenges for the modern society. This particular essay will examine the reasons for job losses and propose appropriate keys to solve this issue.
I am convinced that two main reasons for absence of work are CONSIDERED TO BE the country's poor economic policy and availability of many specialists in the same industry. Territories with negative Gross Domestic Product (GDP) dynamics are unable to invest in creating additional ventures, which would create new sub-industries and sources of income for the population. For example, many political articles note that Turkmenistan owns an ineffective monetary system, therefore their unemployment rate is more than 10%. In addition, certain professions are rapidly becoming extremely popular among students consequently generating oversupply of labors in particular sectors of business. For instance, in the Soviet Union the vast majority of college kids degreed in engineering which led to collapse of this industry. Thus, a weak financial infrastructure and an overabundance of managers in certain spheres does DO not allow the polity to evolve, thereby creating concerns with recruitment on a large scale.
In my opinion, employment challenge can be solved by government officials focus on economy and appropriate guidance for undergrads to receive education in demanded specialties. A strong finance strategy establishes working places and allows citizens to find opportunities in certain industries. Collaboration with foreign countries is also vital, as international investments boost creation of new businesses and enterprises. For example, multiple opportunities were created for Chinese, when nations from the West opened their plants and corporations in Asia. Educational institutions should constantly monitor the human resources market and direct pupils to those areas where experts are mostly needed. Hence, politicians and Ministry of education need to act collectively in order to support citizens to enjoy a wealthy life.
Given all of the above, one of the biggest problems of unemployment is undeveloped budget segment and an abundant supply of employees in identified fields . The solution to that is focusing on upgrading the fiscal framework and directing folks to areas where professionals are most in demand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70810810811 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1305302125 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672972972973 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9212274903 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.235294118 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.053781469039 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0167710759509 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363438229796 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445365694592 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527437671997 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 78.4519038076 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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