It is said that university and other educational centers should not discriminate in registering students on the basis of sex. But I disagree entirely with this point of view because we should consider the needs of our society as well as fitting it for each gender.
Although it seems to be unfair to differentiate between male and female, I believe that it is essential that the needs of society have put precedence before discussion over the educational discrimination. According to the last research carried out by the University of Tehran, the ratio of men dentist to women ones is 10:1, and it is a sign of lack of female medical profession in Iran. Moreover, for having a sustainable family, women should dedicate their time and energy on bringing up their children instead of going to college or working or other types of activities like them.
In spite of this fact that either male and female can work on any kinds of activity, some academic subjects and consequent careers are not suitable for both sexes. The logic behind it is that some jobs such as mechanic require a robust physical for repair cars, and it is genuinely hard for a girl to do it properly. Also, it can be correct that some careers need features. For instance, if you intend to be a good nurse, you should be profoundly patient, and it is a well-known fact that patience is one of the inner virtues of women.
Overall, although some say that an equal proportion of girl and boy pupils should be enrolled in educational centers, I think that the priority of these places should be on the needs of countries.
- In some country the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them. 78
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- The bar graph below shows the number of tourists visiting two different cities by season Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 69
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6917562724 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69185888154 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7870793428 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.9 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151429437252 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561394142728 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377212003826 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086754849188 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149041054845 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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