Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Submitted by nundc on Thu, 04/02/2015 - 16:50

University's education play a vital role in anyone's career. Nowadays, large number of students are taking the university education in comparison to past and some people argue that equal number of male and female students should be accepted by universities in every subject. However, I oppose this view point for several reasons.

Firstly, it is not practical to admit equal number of male and female students. The subjects that are preferred by male are generally different from those preferred by female. For example, nursing profession is generally chosen by female and due to this reason it is obvious that number of female students who study nursing degree would be significantly higher than male students who study this subject. Conversely, number of male students are generally higher in civil engineering courses in comparison to female students. If universities force impractical criteria of admitting equal male and female students in these courses, the total number of students in each course would be dramatically too low and universities would run out of business.

The second important reason is that paradoxically such trend would create the unbalanced society. in the future. The current society is highly balanced by the contribution of male and female students from different professions. If there is an equal number of students in each professional subjects, everyone competes for the same job category in equal proportion. As we know, in some types of profession male could be far behind in comparison to female or vice versa in other types of profession. This could result in only the dominant one getting the job and further it would create scarcity of potential manpower in some jobs which ultimately lead to the handicapped society

In conclusion, university education is important for both male and female but admitting them in equal proportion is out of question practically as well as socially.

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University's education play a vital role
University's education plays a vital role

large number of students are taking the university education
a large number of students are taking the university education

number of male students are generally higher in civil engineering
the number of male students is generally higher in civil engineering

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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Education is considered backbone of a nation. It is also an important element of human life. No nation can develop and prosper unless properly educated. However, both men and women are equally considered to contribute national achievement. Hence, to ensure empowerment and gender discrimination I believe that the universities should offer equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

The main reason I support the notion that the tertiary institutes should accept equal number of boys and girls is to eliminate gender discrimination. In many countries in the world especially in western countries both men and women enjoy equal degree of freedom in all aspect of life. Unfortunately, this is not the same in third world countries. In fact there is an opposite picture exists especially in poor nations where male dominate in most of the aspects. For instance, in some nations male doctors are not allowed to inspect and treat female patients and thus the authorities give preference in female candidates in those subjects. Whereas in developed world there is virtually no sex differentiation and pupils can get admitted any subjects they are interested in. What I want to highlight here is that if educational institutions pick equal number of students from both gender it will not only eliminate impartiality that might exist once graduates enter employment but also equalize the balance between male and female employees.

The other reason I strongly believe that all educational institutes should take the same number of male and female candidates is due to gender empowerment. As we are aware that female candidates may have more attraction to nursing programs whereas male candidates may be interested in sport. This way it might bring inequality of gender ration once they are graduated. Therefore, to avoid additional candidates to a particular discipline universities can offer admissions same number of boys and girls. In fact, such practice would help to stop the disruption between both sexes and will make sure empowerment of both sexes uniquely.

In conclusion, needless to say that for every stages of national and international achievement both sexes are vitally essential. So I believe that both male and female should receive equal level of education and, hence, all institutes should accept the same number of genders in every subject.