UNIVERSITIES SHOULD ACCEPT EQUAL NUMBER OF MALE AND FEMALE STUDENT IN EVERY SUBJECT.WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DIS AGREE?

Essay topics:

UNIVERSITIES SHOULD ACCEPT EQUAL NUMBER OF MALE AND FEMALE STUDENT IN EVERY SUBJECT.

WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DIS AGREE?

nowadays education have become a parte and partial part of each every individual so student are performing well in in every subject and field in order to make their future luminous whether it could be male or female.

firstly,in this bygone days female are able to compete with male and some time they perform very well as compair to male. we can see the women in each and every field and at every post. so that is a great success of our nation so universities should give admition male and female equaly.

secoundly ,however in this 21st century female are not intrusted in each and every field as compair to male likewise civil,IIT,army, and also in some well known companies accordingly google, microsoft ect. on the other hand in that kind of thing female can also perform very well but they are less intreasted in this kind of field or job so universities should provide equal chance to male and female but if there is vacancy on female than they ought to take male impalce of female.

to be conclude nowadays female are getting equale flying colours of like male and they also have performed well in study so universities should accept equal number of male and female because education is the write of each and every person fro his or her birth.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n is the write of each and every person fro his or her birth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, so, well, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66816143498 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36707594365 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533632286996 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4401860334 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.714285714 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1428571429 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258185538574 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129170980776 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597868290189 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175700009648 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501359929583 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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