There is no doubt that the education system should be devoid of gender discrimination. Many people believe that universities should offer an equal position to males and females in each academic subject. Indeed, to proliferate as an educated nation and economically viable country, universities should give equal opportunity to every sex.
First and foremost, in many universities, there is a fixed number for student entrance. Moreover, some faculties at universities such as - math and science prioritise male students, while health and language departments are more flexible at taking female students. To clarify, in my country the highest proportion of students in medical universities consists of females because there is a common belief that girls are better in the health care profession. Therefore, the ratio of sexes while applying at universities is organised unequally.
Nevertheless, the academies should be more feasible for every student. Depending on merits and grades students should be selected for each subject rather than their gender. If a student is an expert in solving equations and mathematical problems but compelled to study in arts due to inadequate sit at university, he or she might despise the study process. As a result, the future career of a student might be in despair and uncertainty.
To recapitulate, although there is a misconception among people that certain subjects should give more priority to either female or male pupils, for each subject universities should offer an equal position for both sexes. In my view, while universities are the highest academic centre for the education they should not impart gender inequity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46718146718 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02396737718 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9156062828 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292120415979 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10644625694 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659326550293 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182088555876 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445175294769 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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