Today, societies are determinedly (resolutely) seeking to put aside all forms of discrimination especially gender disparity, while this is more pressing in academia. Yet, the question here is, what does gender equality mean? Does this mean equality in the numbers of male and female students in each situation?
In the past, the belief was based on that men are more eligible (qualified) than women for taking important positions such as political issues. Consequently, in universities, men had a priority over women to be trained for these positions. With the passage of time, nevertheless, women have proved (demonstrated) their abilities through different situations, and therefore, have found their niche in crucial places. Germany is a case in point. After World War II, over a decade, smashed Germany had been flourished by German women who were leftover from the war so that now, led by one of the most successful women in the world.
However, I think equality could be reached with the provision of the same condition for both genders. Given that, eligible persons would be chosen by a fair competition for programs regardless of their gender. Therefore, evidently this is possible that in some subjects the majority are men Or vice versa, for there are differences in the personality of men or women according to their gender which naturally makes them more apt for special matters. For example, women are excellent in secretaryship or teaching.
To conclude, unlike the past, opinion is equality between men and women which is achieved by impartial competition and far from prejudice. On the contrary, compulsively filling university programs with an equal number of men and women is an exemplar for inequality.
- It is better for children if the whole families e g aunts uncles and grandparents are involved in the children s upbringing rather than their fathers and mothers only Do you agree or disagree with this opinion 90
- Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older while others think that they should stay at home with the family discuss both views and give your own opinion 92
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? 84
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 78
- Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... With the passage of time, nevertheless, women have proved demonstrated their ab...
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Suggestion:
...ugh different situations, and therefore, have found their niche in crucial place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, i think, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47482014388 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19435802508 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636690647482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8323435798 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892024133121 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365520917622 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476849653409 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669047656248 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058180804487 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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