Sexual discrimination is now just an anachronistic thought, especially in education. Many suggest that colleges be approval to the balance between male and female students in all aspects. This essay will discuss the right for women's desire for a better knowledge.
First of all, about a century ago, an old custom which is the man-dominating society was eliminated in the Western culture, later it spread out over the world. This will be the encouragement for universities to allow girls from high school to enroll in with the same quantity of the boys. As an illustration, in the US, there are several schools and colleges open for all individuals who wish to join no matter what their gender is.
Regarding the capability, women are as well as men in many aspects such as sports or education. They not only have enough strength and intelligence to compare with the males but also generally their diligence are even better. For instance, many female scientists, students or politicians made their names written in the history, remarkably Marie Curie. One of the most distinguished women achieved two Nobel Prizes and was the top student back to her university. According to recent surveys, although starting from the same ability, many male students have been left behind in projects, especially the ones which are group work mostly on account of their distraction from the outside such as parties, chat-chit cafes and online games. Meanwhile, female students tend to focus on their topics and finish before the deadline.
In conclusion, outdated thoughts are vastly bad and should be erased which is good for the teaching environment and women will be able to show their full efficiency if there is no gender discrimination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11267605634 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82505861169 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637323943662 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1956945786 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101054414966 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369718439819 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358453472045 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551825307832 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273194098361 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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