Some experts argue that universities should be admitted the equl number of boys and girls students on each subject.I strongly agree with this statement and think that to establised the gender equality and grew the availability of women in all sector university should be given the parallel opportunity for both of them.
First of all, to the installation of gender resemblance university should be taken the equl number of male and female students.However, it is twenty one century that should not be discrimination on anyone subject or field by analysing the gender, women can also perform the extravagent works and ability on any sector.Although university encouraged the women by open the same vacancies on any type of subjects for both of them.In addition,every university of all over the world should be started the campaign for same proportion of male and female students admission programme on each subject eventhough to produced the similar range of product of male and female in all areas.
Eventhough, that should be needed the proper involvement of women on every sector.Until today, we can not found satisfactory participation of women and the that have low involvement of women in some specific sector such as socilal, political and economical ect.Women who can not easily partcipate this high level of field or subject because that have lots conventional and critical belief and thinking in our societies.Although the access of men has extremely high than women in several areas.However, university have power to risen the propoertion of women in all subject by made the appropriate policies in the case of ancipation of women on this all subject.For instance, university might be start motivational seminar or programme to ecncourage the girls students for study on different subjects.
To recapitulate, universities should be given the prioritised on the paralled education, to established the gender equality and rise the proportion of women in all sphere, that is why, they should be grabbed the equal number of male and female students in each subjects on their institution.
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- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 56
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 56
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- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29640718563 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18319799433 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491017964072 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 20.2975951904 409% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.376799823 49.4020404114 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 442.25 106.682146367 415% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.5 20.7667163134 402% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267800169258 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206528821514 0.084324248473 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713848667975 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206528821514 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713848667975 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.3 13.0946893788 346% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.23 50.2224549098 -42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.44779559118 285% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 11.3001002004 326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.63 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.1190380762 348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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