Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Gender gap in universities, specifically in many subjects has become a debatable matter. Male-female imbalance in STEM is frequent as the proportion of male students is eight times as much as female students. Female students in Humanity and Art fields outnumber their male encounters by three to one. I am of the opinion that universities should enroll both female and male students with the same amount in every subject.
Firstly, the more gender gap widens the more chances discrimination takes place. It is clear that a female-dominated class makes the minority less open themselves and become more reserved, which may inhibit the other gender’s development and lead to weak performance at school. It also goes the other way around. As an example, there is only one guy in my class and he is usually quiet and seems to be isolated because there is no other male student could talk and share with him.
Secondly, class has equivalent in genders improves students’ communication skills especially in intimate relationship with the opposite sex. It is crucial for both male and female to have a suitable environment to make friend with the opposite gender. Many people believe that if a man or a woman stays in a one gender community for a long period of time, they will eventually struggle to befriend and even and talk to the other sex in a comfortable way.
All in all, universities should address the gender gap issue and set an objective of recruiting more men or women in all subjects to create a decent equity
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253521126761 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.12323943662 0.155533422707 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12676056338 0.0946595960268 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0387323943662 0.0501214627716 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0352112676056 0.0437548338989 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112676056338 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0140845070423 0.0403226058552 35% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.92936477395 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281690140845 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105633802817 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176056338028 0.021408717616 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00352112676056 0.011925033212 30% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1530.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90733590734 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335907335907 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243243243243 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189189189189 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11583011583 0.137316102897 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92936477395 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.6453660824 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5833333333 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3530850446 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 45.9076576577 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.92857142857 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244360403381 0.332605444948 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110494726454 0.102741220458 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0487152280746 0.0668466124924 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576309287667 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180862027696 0.148594505496 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10734988943 0.134430193775 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657218672012 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276558004933 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0547483909682 0.0638462369009 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17268786322 0.228012699653 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052380927981 0.058150111329 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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