Universities should accept equal numbers of Male and female students in every subject
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
some Universities should accept equal members of each sex in every major by national policy. I disagree about this policy.
Normally, in a few majors, it is expected that different percentage of applying numbers of male and female, because they have the other sights of the majors. For example, major of nursing has small percentage of male students. Actually, they need some male nurses in hospital societies; however, it takes on thinking of appliers.
If some majors accept equal members of male and female students, it makes some problems in our society. In this period, many occasions occur by their needs like the rule of demand and supply. If accepting equal members in every major, some majors could not gather maximum students, so some students who have a low interested about the majors. it makes bad atmosphere in the class.
Someone who agrees the policy said that we have to give same opportunities to each sex. I agree to this opinion, however, they are totally different. In our society, we give to them same opportunities enough. we got equalism in education environment. A few countries have a problem giving same chances to each sex by their culture or reliable reasons; however, it is not solution in these cases. For equalism, we do not have to accept equal members of each sex in the majors, but have to accept members who want to enter it without denying.
In this several reasons, I disagree that accepting equal members of male and female students in every major.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-17 | Binita sapkota | 56 | view |
- In some country young people are encouraged to work or travel for year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 73
- Universities should accept equal numbers of Male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some Universities should accept equal member...
^^^^
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...have a low interested about the majors. it makes bad atmosphere in the class. S...
^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...give to them same opportunities enough. we got equalism in education environment. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92913385827 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56697744025 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1645054744 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.25 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239060613968 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818216027273 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895433107387 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171242029103 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988721191484 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.