Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At this present day and age, men and women have equal rights to educational attainment. educational institutions such as colleges and universities should allow the same number of male and female enrollees in every subject. This author completely agrees to the statement and will give her own perspectives.
To begin with, universities should consider having same number of male and female in the courses to prevent gender inequality. Through this, both sexes will have the right to gain knowledge in the particular subject without feeling outcast. For instance, according to statistics more male students are studying mathematics which makes them think that they are superior to female in this subject. If the school will balance the number of the two genders attending this subject matter, they will both learn that the ability of solving numerical problems does not depend on gender differences.
Apart from this, by balancing the number of men and women studying in every subject will benefit the society and the university itself. This may serve as an opportunity to help the students to achieve diverse knowledge in various courses; as a result, the school will be able to produce more competent individuals for future workforce. To elucidate, Nursing for example, in the past this study was only for female as what they believed that women are naturally compassionate and caring. If the university will allow the same number of male in this field of study, more professionals will be produced to serve the healthcare. Therefore, the school will be able to increase its educational standards as its students both male and female are flexible to play different roles in the field of employment which will also be advantageous to the community.
To recapitulate, education is for all people despite the gender differences. Balancing the number of male and female students in every course will have merits to the students, educational institutions and the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Educational
...equal rights to educational attainment. educational institutions such as colleges and unive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2334384858 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82835675729 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498422712934 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1213019936 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235098184587 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980643630832 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812192102162 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167038961883 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309572490425 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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