Education is important to every human beings and the courses are available for both male anf female whereas both have rights to choose the subjests of their interest.Some people argue that tertiary education should accept them equally in every courses.I completely agree with the statements and this essay will disscuss the reasons,
The most compelling reason for holding my reason is that universisties should provide courses for male and female without any discrimination along with encouraging female to choose course without any hesitation that they could compete the male in those subject. For instance boys are more involve in mathematics and indicate themselves as superior than female. So to remove this attitude girls should be persudaed to take difficult subject. If it is happen there wont be feeling of bias in their subjest and number of women engage in competitive subjects will be increase.
Another reason for holing my position is that because of universities acceptance of equal number of male and female, today root of dicrimination had been eradicated and its also contribtued on the developmet of society. For instance female involve in civil enginnering as man do and both did well as a result many positive chages can be seen in the society. Moreover, if higher education is restrict female on certain subject then many developed cou try will be underdeveloping like Nepal.Furthermore,by balancing a number of male and female studying in every subject leads befits of the country and university itself.In past
nursing was merely for femlae beacause they think that woman are naturally compassionate and helathcare is suitable for them.If it is available for man then number of pressional will be produce in healthcare sectors.
To sump up, Universities courses should provide equally to both gender.To balance them on education sector universities should be more concern towards the consequence of allowing subjects for male and female rather than dividing subjects according to the gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37106918239 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94391357062 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.050097738 49.4020404114 362% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.5 106.682146367 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.75 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282504735078 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116304827993 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749289549337 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161556048834 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794780763931 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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