Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female
students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, universities are witnessing a quantum leapt , hence , this trend induced the enlarging the window of academic opportunities for public. Some people think that institutions should embody equal numbers of both male and females , but, others hold the conservative view vice versa.
On the one hand , accepting both gender students equally would ne a boon for women. Some faculties are too saturated with the blurry of males who are skillful, wise and the entrance potential of females is exorbitantly low. So, most of the women nurse a grievance against this trend and even sow truce among public. So, implementing the attendance of female students equated to the amount of males would be the step in the right direction. Because, by taking this action , government will become able to provide the gender equality and become rescued from the different incidences like ceasefire , grievances, and contradict views whic concern the misconduct and segregation of the education system.
On the other hand, accepting students in the same amount might play as a backfire. The reason behind this is that, universities might become staggered whether providing equality or encircling the knowledgeable students with higher education. In my view students should be chosen robustly by considering their affinities and abilities than embodying both genders in the same amount. Because, rather making incompetent female applicants attended to further education, it is more plausible to choose the one who have preeminent knowledge among others. As a result , societies might achieve better-qualified , highly educated staff , following that, more fullfilling and productive lives as well.
In conclusion, I reckon that accepting male and female students in the same quantity would be viable solution to maintain equality, but , at the meantime this might turn into misguided action. Therefore, students should be chosen according to their abilities as well as level of knowledge.
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but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, even so, i reckon, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53311258278 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94369520661 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1791652818 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211912741791 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739057449567 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498880562678 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135390246432 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145438563921 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.