universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subjects. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the last few years, remarkable increases have been in proportion of educated people, particularly women throughout the world. obviously, the quantitative equality between men and women in regard to acceptance in universities has both benefits and drawbacks, however I believe that its disadvantages outweigh advantages.
some people believe that quantitative equality regarding to access to educational opportunities in every subjects will promote the quality of scientific majors. they have so many logical reason to support their idea. For example, scientific research demonstrates that the ability of males and females to learn things is completely different. According to statistical results men compared with women have more potential for accepting in engineering majors like electrical engineering. on the other hand, a big part of people who are accepted in social sciences comprised of woman. thus, many applicants who want to major in particular subject may be miss their chance to accept in their favorite major because of not having enough potential to accept. This problem is more common in some countries, where the only criteria to accept students is university entrance exam like Iran.
however, some people strongly are opposed to the quantitative equality between male and female to accept students. This group support their idea with this statement that such a process to accept students result in educational inequality. Because applicants who are qualified to accept in a special major with regard to this condition will miss the chance of acceptance simply. As well as this, they say that accepting some applicant with less qualification and potential may be lead to decreasing quality in some subjects.
to sum up, although there is a huge sexual gap in the percentage of acceptance in some majors, quantitative equality is not a practical way to solve this problem. of course, in some majors this rule could be useful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, in particular, of course, as well as, in regard to, to sum up, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39344262295 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94060892765 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5655870889 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164686111131 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597407081138 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434356835254 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986263871805 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404979323342 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.