Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every student in this world has the opportunity to get education . Therfore, tertiary educational institutes should allot equal number of seats for girls and boys in every stream. I completely agree with this statement and I believe nobody should be deprived from education based on gender. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the positive effect of providing education to pupils.
To embark on, on the one hand, it helps to diminish the line of gender discrimination in the society. In this patriarchal society, boys get more preference than girls, therefore, ladies get the least resources to thrive. Ultimately, girls cannot be able to show their capabilities and strength. However, providng equal opportunities will surely increase the chances of beand to get a sing independent , consequently they can play a significant role in the upliftment of the nation. Moreover, it also induces a sense of respect among men regarding women when they become well educated and compete them in every field.
On the other hand, it also persuades the girl empowerment. When women get the chance to explore different fields , they certainly put their abilities to achieve success in particular sector. For example- today, the participation of girls in leading armies and flying the fighter planes, certainly shows their excellence.However, previously, it was considered that women are perceived to do domestic work only, but now this is totally opposite. In every sector, women are contributing an indispensable role and becoming the productive member of society.
To conclude, there should be same number of male and female students in universities because it not only help to empower the girls but also diminish the gender discrimination in the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3321299639 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05894264445 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4718072227 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145355805179 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477865668474 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638302760432 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104813542228 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780760767991 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.