University education should be free to everyone regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
From the past many years, we can see that university education fees are significantly increasing and due to that many students are not able to take admission in good university and they devoid from better education. Though, I believe that university education should be free.
One argument to advocate the free education is, it will give chance to those students who are really intelligent, talented but not able to get admission owing to their worst financial situation and not getting financial support from the family. Because of that the country has to suffer from the lack of intelligent workforce in each and every field which deter the development of the nation. In addition, those students who don't get the admission just because of their poor financial condition it affects detrimentally to their mind and sometimes possibilities that they start to damage or harm the society as well themselves also. Second important argument or can say perspective for free education is, it increases the interest of people in study or also encourage them for education consequently, it gives better, well qualified workforce to the nation.
However, one argument to make some fees over the university education is, it helpful and support in the development of university. As student will get the higher salary job after their studies it is reliable and fair that they should pay at least some amount to the university. Moreover, if student pay some then it will keep their mind in thinking of that they have to focus on study and not to waste the money what they paid for education.
To sum up, I strongly believe that there are many benifits to make free university education over the paid university education. As it is helpful in many ways in the development of society and nation. So, I completely agree with the university education should be free to everyone regardless of income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, well, as to, at least, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00317460317 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76750754463 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7060311849 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180836921012 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876872815965 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983991472452 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132975068296 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765142082961 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.