University should accept equal number of men and women in every subject. To what extent do you agree?
At a time, when gender equality has become the buzz world, by providing equal number of opportunities as men to participate in some areas like politics, education and others. Therefor, university should take decision about accept equal number of male and female in every subjects. I, completely agree with the provided statement.
First of all, sexual equality was the major concern in the past in some working field like engineering and others. So, at that time, universities did not provide and admission to females in some restricted courses but in recent women are providing impressive services in their working area. Furthermore, females are also capable to do a hardwork for achieving a success in major subjects. Because of the, above achievement of women, for improving and gaining more success of her, it is required to admit same number of male and female in all universities study programs. For instance, in India, 65% of females had taken a master's degree in different study programs from different universities, it indicated that interest of women towards gaining education is more.
On the other side, parents are also motivating for participation in numerous educational other activities like sports. As a result of this, women involved in varieties of extra-curricular activities and also gain the best result. So,not only required to admit men candidate in sport university programmes but it provides same and equal opportunities to female candidate also. According to the survey of Oxford university, reports show that after admission of female candidates in university, overall ranking of university in the world raised upto 2 points, in which women participation was major compared to men.
To conclude this topic, before taking decision about acceptance of equal gender equality in every subject in university, management should analyse the whole points of view towards development by males and females.
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also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38283828383 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94745156487 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.504236627 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261224948238 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898790165006 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746786318018 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171579037001 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727124480636 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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