University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Nowadays gender differences are disappearing. Some people believe that universities should accept an equal amount of boys and girls student. I agree with given statement and will give some reasons in following paragraph.
In recent times gender differences are disappearing people consider man and female equal. they think that female can do anything which is done by man. Moreover they think there is no work remain which can not done by female person. For example, women are now join Navy, Army and which is done by man before but the numbers of female workers at such type of job is increase. Furthermore, people give equal respect to both female and male but few decades ago people give respect to men more.
Moreover, universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. I agree with this view because male and female both have equal rights to gain knowledge, they can learn every subject which is taught by universities. Also there are many benefits of this phenomenon, if universities accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subjects show the remained gender differences are disappearing soon. Moreover there are some jobs where male workers are doing but if universities accept equal members of male and female students so after their studies equal numbers of female and male worker will do work in future. but there are some particular jobs such as mechanic, if that type of job done by male worker so it is better than female worker.
To conclude, gender differences are disappearing today, universities should teach equal numbers of male and female students in every subjects I agree with this view because it is beneficial for world to give every subject's knowledge to every female and male students. but there are some jobs where male can do better work as compared to female.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01618122977 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54103635627 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430420711974 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6644692333 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40294596839 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157859534909 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132875617382 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274230126318 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121043106462 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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