University should accept same number of male and female students to every subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that both males and females should receive equal opportunities in education. However, accepting the same amount of students in both gender for every university subject, in my opinion, is absolutely impractical and unfair.
First of all, it is indisputably unrealistic to base admission on gender since not every subject is well designed for male as well as female students. There are some careers that are more suitable for a special kind of gender such as nursing or mechanical engineering. Take nursing as an example, this subject is simply less appealing to males compared to females. Therefore, if a medical institute waits until it gets equal applications un both genders for acceptance, it would take an eternity to gain completion. Mechanical engineering is another prominent instance as it seems to be more attractive and suitable for male students than their counterparts.
Beside the practical concern, another factor that needs to be taken in account is the qualifications. As most admission systems to universities nowadays do, a candidate need to meet some special requirements before being accepted to their dream school namely a singer-to-be is asked to have strong voice as well as some basic knowledge in music. A professional university cannot accept a student with lower grades or less qualifications. Instead, every institute would take a well-qualified student even though the gender of that student holds the majority amount in the two genders.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position in disagreement with the idea that university should take 50 percent of students both genders to enter their courses regarding the reality of subject-gender agreement and qualifications. The educational quality is better performed in students' acquisition, not in the quantity of males and females.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun qualifications is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37457044674 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16118330877 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3521353622 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197381777035 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740514928932 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533250300534 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135904518393 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572958791192 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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