These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
Recently, finding an occupation or studying in a foreign country for a certain period of time has become a controversial trend which often divides opinions. Some people contend that it is beneficial to do so whilst the others object the idea by listing some drawbacks they may encounter. This tendency, indeed, bring both positive and negative effects on human life.
First of all, it is indisputably true that living abroad can benefit people one way or another. Take job experience for example, workers who spent a year or so overseas will surely have those valuable experiences that employers favorably seek for. In addition, exchanged students can apparently get better qualification for future job or at least get a chance to immerse themselves in an alien culture which somehow broadens their horizons.
In stark contrast, however, overseas people unfortunately get to deal with some downsides of this issue namely the language barrier and culture shock of they do not have effective adaptation skill. For instance, international students whose majors are not language will find it hard to cope with the native language and the misunderstandings caused by language may become their daily headache. Beside language barrier, cultural differences are, in fact, a detrimental issue for those who live in other nations. The Asian is a prominent example of this, as coming to America or Europe, they properly be justified by their skin color or culinary style which is considered inappropriate in those cosmopolitan cities.
By way of conclusion, living abroad obviously has its own upsides and downsides regarding experience, language and culture. For better or worse, it depends on the way we adjust ourselves to get on with the new living environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ying in a foreign country for a certain period of time has become a controversial trend which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2846975089 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92522361018 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7911473879 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215725812399 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076432397979 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457798708089 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124997532904 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429916364457 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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