University students are increasingly studying abroad as of their studies. Do the advantages abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, an increasing concern for many students around the world is studying overseas as a part of their degrees. In spite of handling with cultural diversity as one of the predominant benefits, homesickness can be the toughest drawbacks that they will inevitably face. In this essay I will examine the positive and negative aspects of this phenomenon and provide my overall opinion.
Perhaps one of the greatest benefits of studying in foreign countries is that students have to deal with their peers from different cultures. Handling with such situations can create life experiences that will improve the students themselves as people. For instance, students who pursued their higher education from overseas tend to blind more easily and effortlessly with people from different background. Therefore, becoming more aware with other’s cultures , and understanding them, is thus one of the biggest advantage of studying abroad.
The main challenge that students can experience while studying overseas will usually be the feeling of homesickness. Having no family or friends around make the students fell not supported and lonely all the time. For example, If a student traveled alone and was not able to deal with the feeling of lone less and missing his home country, that would have a dramatic effect on his education response and the overall this ultra challenging experience.
In conclusion, it has become more popular to get higher education from overseas. This essay illustrated the main advantage by becoming familiar with different culture and home sickness as the main downside. Weighing up all the facts, it will seem that the advantage of this trend is superior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34456928839 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77828514462 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5609484526 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162144006734 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585547832772 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535100831562 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920195782529 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466366528505 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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