In the present days, online social mediums are taking over direct interaction's place among individuals in the modern society. Even though the benefits those platforms carry are notable, their drawbacks totally outweigh the advantages for two main reasons: they make people idle and prevent them from having the necessary social skills.
The use of social media decreases human's physical ability. As obvious as it is, social media has the power to attract people's attention, drag them into an endless loop of constantly consuming contents online and make them an addict. This leads to a indifference in physical activities, which are already less appealing to most of the public, hence results in a decline in overall public health. For example, statistics show that the more frequently people use social networks, the less they are capable of handling moderate physical tasks that used to be easy for them to do.
Lack of social skills is also a problematic issue. Not only people's interest in physical activities is going down, they also are less encouraged to socializing in real life. This can be attributed to the convenience social networks brings to the table. However, lacking essential skills such as cooperating, working in group and communicating can leave a detrimental effect on people's career or personal life. For instance, research show that graduated pupils have smaller chances of being accepted for a position in accompany if they do not have the required skills.
In conclusion, the downsides greatly outweigh the merits as social media discourage people to involved in beneficial activities and make them short of the fundamental social skills.
- The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29323308271 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71422323049 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3786391064 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201819737646 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763376960694 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484276451025 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128880864005 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289058718331 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.