Walking is known to be beneficial for health but these days the number of people walking has reduced a lot what are the reasons for this What can be done to tackle this problem

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humans health is made better by walking.Howeve...
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...humans health is made better by walking.However,nowadays,walking has been declined enou...
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...health is made better by walking.However,nowadays,walking has been declined enough by maj...
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...lined enough by majority of individuals.It has a factor behind this problem as wel...
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...ehind reduce of walking is a technology.Undoubtedly,people spend much time on mobiles for s...
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...aying games in computers and cellphones.In this way,they do not play physical acti...
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...face many health problems in their life.For example,it is researched by world healt...
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...ealth problems in their life.For example,it is researched by world health organizat...
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...es owing ti lack of walking.consequently,breakthrough of technology is responsible for this b...
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... responsible for this biggest hardship. Moving towards solution to solve this pr...
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...rds solution to solve this problem with less uses of vehicles.people should walk on ...
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...at their house rather than transportion.Not only,it can improve walking among peopl...
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... house rather than transportion.Not only,it can improve walking among people but al...
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...an improve walking among people but also,they can protect from harmful ailments like,...
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...y can protect from harmful ailments like,knee pain,diabetes,psychopathic etctera.For ...
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...r instance,as an ancient human were not use any mode of transport and they were kee...
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... were keep fit and healthy owing to long walk.As a result,an increasing level of ...
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...eep fit and healthy owing to long walk.As a result,an increasing level of walking...
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... healthy owing to long walk.As a result,an increasing level of walking easily whic...
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...hich will better for modern generation. To conclude,although,this problem is dee...
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...er for modern generation. To conclude,although,this problem is deep rooted because of ...
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...m is deep rooted because of many reasons,yet,it can be fixed by working shoulder to ...
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...be fixed by working shoulder to shoulder,because every lock has a key.Depite of health i...
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...o shoulder,because every lock has a key.Depite of health illness,people use to technol...
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... lock has a key.Depite of health illness,people use to technology.However,walking can i...
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...health illness,people use to technology.However,walking can improve if one avoid much u...
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...illness,people use to technology.However,walking can improve if one avoid much use of ve...
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...h use of vehicles and technoloy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02620087336 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.79691093243 2.80592935109 171% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694323144105 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.270528393 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 345.0 106.682146367 323% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.25 20.7667163134 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.25 7.06120827912 372% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302002195827 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166430445269 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472230013039 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166430445269 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472230013039 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.6 13.0946893788 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.3 50.2224549098 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.58 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.64 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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