Some people are beieve that family members os important than friends.Do you agree or disagree?
In fact family play vital role in human being life also,for animals.The member of family is influnce on each other. There few masses are think that the tribe is necessary part of life than the colleagues.However,I am fully agree with the statement and I will delve my point of views in my upcomming pharagraphs.
To commence with,there are various perspectives about family.It is first stage of life due to blood connection among parents and children.since parents give birth to us.In other words we can say that mother or father learn to us numrous kinds of things such as we thought walk,talk.eat and so on from our domestic life.Moreover,the house members are complete the all requirments to their children for their happiness.
Probing further,parents are well supported for infants.They are always be helpfull in their life as well as the older perosns are often motivate to babies for their future.Instead of,our mother or father is very carefully for us they always neglect our weakness but they do improve the lacks due to best guidence.
To conclude,both are important however in my opinion people should never forget kindness of their foster parents.In my an experince,nowadays yongsters are doing evil behavior with elder humans they do not give respect to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16826923077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20040316779 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677884615385 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.948833567 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.0 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6 20.7667163134 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103447699818 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616154256639 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398021411764 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643910384157 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469290269282 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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