Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that it is more attractive to attend a live performance such as a melodrama or a soccer match rather than simply sitting at home with eyes glued to the screens, whereas others think it would be more economical and safe to stay in than joining a crowd. From my perspective, the former is incredibly wonderful than the latter.
To begin with, watching a live performance outweighs online watching in terms of the audience’s emotions. It is because people would feel more involved in company with those who are indulged in the same interests, thus engaging more in the performance. In addition, when partaking a live event, attendees’ feelings are easily affected by the exciting atmosphere and wild environment in which they are in, making them become more energetic to blend in with other enthusiasts.
Secondly, comparing with enjoying the event at home, joining a live one makes us more concentrate without several distractions such as phone chiming. It is costly tickets or extravagant seats that invisibly force you to stay focus during the performance, leading to the fact that you can fully enjoy every valuable moment and end up with fulfilled feelings when the event comes to an end.
To conclude, with these foregone advantages, it is understandable to claim that watching a live performance would be more splendid to most of the enthusiasts.
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| 2023-07-10 | dinhngocquynh2003 | 78 | view |
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| 2023-03-13 | trinhthanh1 | 67 | view |
| 2023-03-13 | trinhthanh1 | 67 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10572687225 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90795617659 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616740088106 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6062103886 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.875 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275529076609 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117258515426 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04939010667 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159803473719 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233363177196 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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