Watching TV shows and movies about crime is becoming more and more popular.
Why is this? What effect does that have on society?
The surprisingly high box-office of criminal movies has shown the ordinary people interest in this field. In my perspective, people watch these shows as a leisure activity to satisfy their curiosity and compare the psychological similarities in them and in others. In spite of their initial aim, this deed could lead to both negative and positive aspects to society.
Legend has it that humans are innately curious creatures. For that reason, the topic of criminal lives is always something out of ordinary people's hands, launching a great appeal to human minds. Especially in a criminal movie, besides the amusement in which people figure out which suspect is the real perpetrator, the audiences could make a guess at the motive and the process criminals enacted as well. Therefore, people can try to parse out whether or not these individuals are driven by a particular purpose or they are just harming humans to fulfill morbid desires. If the end results appeared to be exactly right compared to what audiences had previously guessed, they could accordingly take pride in their logical inference.
Nevertheless, in reality we all know for sure that every sinner presumably has his own pity. By discovering the background of him, the audience could compare with their psychological inner souls and in people around them to understand and to empathize with the criminal's misery. Therefore, people could take precautions before a suspicious person’s chance of committing crimes. However, there remains some risk of children accessing criminal shows, since these movies usually contain a whole host of bloody and violent scenes, making it more complicated for parents to control their offsprings’ feelings and attitudes towards people and lives.
In conclusion, people watch crime shows as a satisfying hobby and have a comparison with their psychological characteristics. It is advisable that parents teach their children to be critical audiences. Only by awareness of distinguishing legal and moral actions from the opposite ones, children would not become badly influenced by criminal thinking of perpetration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41087613293 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93767151486 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61329305136 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4446338643 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891273781716 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292222705878 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410700626287 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606428262502 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036827809689 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.