Water resources around the world are falling deficient. Analyze the possible reasons and provide your suggestions.
The widespread problem of the water shortage has long been a major topic of great concern in the society. Some of the major culprits of this problem will be discussed before the most important solutions are drawn.
A decrease in the amount of water could be attributed to several plausible reasons. A prominent factor could be the lack of knowledge about the importance of water. Specifically, many citizens believe that the amount of water on the earth is infinite so they can overuse water from river or ground for their daily activities including watering trees, washing their cars and fulling up their own swimming pools. Another reason is that with many global climate changes, there would be likely to be less rainy in some parts of the world. In western nations, for instance, which have experienced more hot and dry weather in 2018, many local farmers would not be likely to have enough water for feeding livestock and watering crop fields.
It is high time that earnest and urgent efforts to halt this phenomenon were jointly made by both the government and people involved. On a larger scale, the authorities should impose laws to control and limit water usage of individuals every day. In fact, many people tend to lower the amount of water they use to follow the regulations since they are likely to be afraid of punishments from authorities including fines and prison sentences. Another solution is that the governments should stimulate in involvement of private entrepreneurs in organizing green campaigns that help construct man-made lakes or planning more trees. This is because such lakes can help store rainwater to meet the growing needs of drought seasons and such trees can retain ground water where they are planted.
In conclusion, there are several triggers for the explosion of the shortage of water in the society while measures should be adopted at all levels to fully tackle the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... topic of great concern in the society. Some of the major culprits of this problem will be ...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... tend to lower the amount of water they use to follow the regulations since they ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.025 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53838500577 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7207961381 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101677945462 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372096609236 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240760615265 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539804828486 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336877186709 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.