We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
You should write at least 250 words
These days, the great advancement of the Internet has changed our lives. This led to facilitate the utilization if computers in almost every part of our daily life, from personal computers to the ones performing difficult research. Surely, computers have enhanced our productivities and made our lives more comfortable.
In the near future, computers will play more important roles than present. Take communication tools, for example, in the past we had to go to the office or even other countries to attend meeting or close business deal. However, now, we can hold meeting online using SNS like Skype or Zoom, without making trouble of going outside. It can save our time and effort. Moreover, computers can be connected to each other via internet and other networks. This makes it possible to accumulate huge date, which is very helpful for learners and researchers.
Of course, the invention of technology is good thing. So, we should not stay back while we can make the world better place with the availability of computers. However, we should also keep in mind mainly two things. The first is digital divide, which means, as computer technology makes progress, the gap between those who use it and don’t use it will be bigger. The digital divide even lead to expand the gap of the quality of life or how much money they earn. The second is that the use of computers also has dangerous possibilities. If you mistakenly use your computer which is connected with every sorts of your life, your personal data will be seen the light. It is very danger considering security issues.
From what has been discussed above, I can draw the conclusion that the world will be the place where no one can imagine your life without computers. But at the same time, we should also aware of the problems behind this and consider how to use them in order to make our life more comfortable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83591331269 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59523251651 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575851393189 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8509249659 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2105263158 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272162965862 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736899159523 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447246159158 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153603131705 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767139262748 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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