Peace in word is necessary thing for the planet. As people are facing more and more trouble, which can harm whole planet earth, better relationship between different countries are becomming cruscial than ever before. I completly agree with the given statement that good relationship with other nations are important for the country and can help tackel bad time.
Better relationship is necessary and helpful for each and every nation. Firstly, one country can help other country in their tough times, such as if developing country is going through an econimical or financial crises and, if they have good relation with developed country then, it can help developing country in fighting against this difficult time. Secondly, if any country do not have security for their borders, then they can get help from poweful nations(if they have good relation with them). For example, Aafgisthan do not have sufficient army to fight against terrorist, so becouse of their good relation with US, they are getting help from them.
Furthermore, some time good relationship with other countries can help recover from losses faced from natural calamities such as, earthquake or t sunami. For example, when japan was destory by tsanami in 2011, united nation funded them 3,000 core in order to recover form such tough time. Additionaly, friendly nature of nation with each other can also prevent war like event, which can be harmful for the inocent citizens. For instance, compare to world war 2, thesedays due brotherhood in nations is the reason behind our peaceful living.
In conclusion, brotherhood and friendly nature of nation with each other can prevent wars, as well as help each other fighting against tough time. So good relation between different countries are nessary to maintain peace on the planet.
- As we are facing many problems which affect the whole planet good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops 11
- In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first months after the birth of their baby Do advantages outweigh disadvantages 73
- The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950 67
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... if developing country is going through a econimical or financial crises and, if ...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...ith delevelop country then, it can help developing country in fighting against this diffic...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
...ationship with other countries can help getting out from losses faced from natural cala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19520547945 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50756736105 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.160358056 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183195930939 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839705197581 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101330093854 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144880738505 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113595704297 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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