We can not help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own community and country to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement
Most people believe that we should not assist people in other countries. In my stance, Most problems have both advantages and disadvantages. At all, I disagree with this view because it is necessary that we support each other and to do it as possible as we can.
• On the one hand, it is not crucial that assisting our neighbors and fellow citizens is insicetry because in most communities which plenty of poor and disadvantaged people on the lower level of prosperity are intensely warning. To illustrate, it is not immensely challenging to find homeless and disabled people in your country, especially the wealthy and big cities. We have opportunities to undertake charity works as a simple way of donating monetary aids. Besides, in Vietnam which holding significant poverties are capable of giving clothing and food. If we hadn’t given a hand to them, their life wouldn/t have been enhanced. With my view to seeing society, our community is getting more and more homeless people that being an important and touristic problem. For these reasons, we have to help them.
On the other hand, helping homeless people and people who are in flooded areas is an indirect way to step by step expand our quality of life. For the reasons, we are all human beings and inhabitants of this wonderful planet, the earth, we share the same biology.
To conclude, I believe that everyone in the world is capable of helping others. In short, I hope and trust people are awakened by my essay.
- Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 78
- Task 2: It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree? 73
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and to do it as possible as we can. • On the one hand, it is not crucial that ...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
...strate, it is not immensely challenging to find homeless and disabled people in your co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85826771654 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70489346054 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7309384909 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234172036095 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777970591586 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697970578963 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143223759138 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315623389348 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.