We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is commonly believed that we can not effort to aid every people in the world that need support, thus we should only try to take care our countries' people. I completely agree this statement. However, from my point of wiew if we able to do something for other countries' people we should do it
On the one hand nowadays it is hard to survive in a number of countries. for that reason the countries' people do not help other countries' people . Besides according to the fact that even in great powerful countries there are a lot of poor people. Therefor if the people who would like to aid someone they should help in this kind of poor people. If you can help your countries' people after your help they may live as a normal human
On the other hand people should not only help their habitat people but also they try to support other countries' people. Where a large number of poor people live in africa countries' . It is good that nowadays most richest people have helped to african countries' significantly. For instance Bill Gates donated a large number of money to african country.
To sum up, it is clear that it is hard help other countries if you don't rich enough but you can help your countries' people
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- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
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...cantly. For instance Bill Gates donated a large number of money to african country. To sum up,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50454545455 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30715514362 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9527049045 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2695305257 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117724891412 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688096863252 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191788372818 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765875693022 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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