In today's generations, technology has became a routine of daily life. In fact, we are all surround by internet which has few drawback about loosing personal information and confidentiality. In my opinion, internet runs the world, so the problem associate with it is pretty small thereby conquering the threats.
At the outset,there are diverse reason why internet is considered as vital but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that technology has advance the field of communication. Firstly, people can talk for log hours with little payment for talk in the social media which is governed by cyberspace, or at the free of cost. For an instance, in the past, it used to take like a weeks to reach letter to the person, but with the coins of internet , information takes few second to reach the destination. Secondly, people can gain lots of knowledge through the internet, whatever their subject may be. Thirdly, entertainment is very essential in life. Therefore, internet provide the state of blissful moment to people to recover boredom.
However,cyber crime and hacks of private information are common problems of internet. Confidentiality of a person is in threat of being public, which is often easily hacked, to earn money. For example, the social networking sites like face book, twitter, Instragram etc has leaked personal information. Moreover, banks are robbed by black hackers; therein lies the issue for the public. Besides, there are invented many cyber rule to prevent crimes. Various kinds of antivirus software has seen set up to safeguard computer system or data from malicious attack. Thus, the threats of controls and security of information has been minimized.
In conclusion, although Web brings a lot of drawback, it is not that virulent as it seems as compared to its benefits. Government should give more emphasis to investigate cyber crime and should launch more defense for security of information
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
In todays generations, technology has became a routine of daily life. In fact, we ar...
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Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun drawback seems to be countable; consider using: 'few drawbacks'.
Suggestion: few drawbacks
... are all surround by internet which has few drawback about loosing personal information and ...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rsonal information and confidentiality. In my opinion, internet runs the world, so...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...conquering the threats. At the outset,there are diverse reason why internet is cons...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a week' or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: a week; weeks
...ance, in the past, it used to take like a weeks to reach letter to the person, but with...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e person, but with the coins of internet , information takes few second to reach t...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun second seems to be countable; consider using: 'few seconds'.
Suggestion: few seconds
...e coins of internet , information takes few second to reach the destination. Secondly, peo...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cyber
...to people to recover boredom. However,cyber crime and hacks of private information ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20127795527 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9134331678 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635782747604 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.58733801 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14631794232 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416958708919 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041963073573 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880671627526 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363668204349 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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