Wealthy nations should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief during naional disaster. do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that developed countries should help underdeveloped nations when they face natural disasters. This essay agrees with this statement because it is their obligatory moral right to do so and they have the funds to.
To begin, for the sake of humanity, it is the right of the rich countries to come to the rescue of the poor nations when they are facing natural crises. When there is a natural disaster, it is a good thing to show support and love. This will make those facing this challenge mentally strong and loved. And as a result, are able to overcome their difficulties with ease. In addition, this kind of gesture will build strong bonds between countries, therefore, making the world a peaceful place. A good example of this was when Haiti experienced a major landslide that killed over a million persons, the American government showed a lot of support in terms of providing medical personnel, medications, food, and shelter. The president of Haiti mentioned this as an honorable act and they will forever remain indebted to the United States.
A second reason why wealthy nations should help the poorer ones is that they have the financial means to. They already have the necessary aids hence, it will be quite easy to render them assistance. Wealthy nations often trade with the poor nations by capitalizing on their vulnerability thus, making large amounts of money. So, it is only fair to offer a helping hand when the need arises. For example, Chinese boosted their economy by using Nigerians as cheap labor, recently China offered to support the Nigerian government against the insurgency in the north.
To conclude, poor nations should be provided with the support they need when facing crises from the rich nations because it is a noble thing to do and moreover, they have the funds to help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52756911264 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2813427363 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167998326488 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587564110378 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641411359118 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124405279344 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417098026199 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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