Wearing uniform is popular in schools, but some people argue that it might cause damage to children’s individuality. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, wearing uniform become more and more popular in many schools while some people believe it may harm to children’s individuality. In my opinion,i think it has a huge advantage from wearing uniform at schools.
There is no denying that wearing uniform is a good idea because it won’t have any bully problems about clothes. Students all have different family backgrounds so it can lead to discrimination if uniform isn’t widespread. As a results, discriminatory treatment might not happen to kids. Beside that uniform also contribute to promoting unity among children. There is no different from outfits so that they can help each other in study or play together in schools. Thus it will improve kids’s personality in how to behave with others.
Those who disagree argue that wearing uniform will limit children’s individuality. They can’t show their personality because of wearing the same clothes. There is no choices as it is the rule was set up by parents and schools. So kids want to find out how to reject uniform by disturb or rebel and wear regular outfits. However; if kids wear normal clothes, it will lead to some competition about who is the most beautiful and trend. Then they can’t focus their main targets of going to schools and cause some bad study results.
All in all, wearing uniform help student more solidary and build friendship steadfast. I hope it continues to grow like that to beautify children’s individuality
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, i think, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20331950207 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00201661989 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605809128631 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6968445663 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365878223154 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109630952331 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780905489881 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223437929115 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908118844532 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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