As well as making money, the business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree
It is argued that companies should be responsible for society besides generating profits. Although money plays a vital role in business operations, social issues are also equally important.
On the one hand, there are certain side benefits of raising money from business activity. Firstly, the more money earned from firms, the more jobs they create for the locality, this will reduce the jobless rate. For example, by making more profits, an international corporation such as Coca-Cola tends to expand the scale over the world, which creates more jobs in the region. Secondly, some enterprises which have an efficient business often pay more taxes for the government annually. As a result, the authorities use this money to re-invest rests of the field, such as developing the infrastructure, this does facilitate in transportation.
On the other hand, there are important reasons why businesses take into consideration social problems. Firstly, in terms of environmental effects, many production companies in developing countries are often irresponsible in the disposal of industrial wastes, giving rise to global warming recently. For example, instead of releasing chemical wastes to rivers, they could establish the drainage system, water pollution could be controlled. Secondly, they should donate money to charitable organizations such as Bill and Melinda Gates foundation or UNICEF. In this way, they not only improve the living standard of the poverty-stricken but also enhance their public images, it is such a win-win partnership.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I hold my initial view that companies should maintain business activity and social responsibilities at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56870229008 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06244852874 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9320620378 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162621815713 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590908979113 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554056569546 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105144336179 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265883283861 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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