As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Businesses have always given priority to making a profit, so there is some concern about whether social obligations were important for companies or not. In my opinion, companies' sole aim is not only maximizing their profit but also protecting the interest of the society.
On the one hand, I support the idea that making money is essential for businesses to succeed in this competitive world. First and foremost, companies have to create profit to cover running costs such as employees' salaries and infrastructure costs. Moreover, profitability allows businesses to invest in innovative projects which create services and products meeting the changing needs of customers. Finally, if companies create continual profit, it can attract a lot of investors who are looking for a potentially good investment option.
On the other hand, I think that businesses' social responsibilities cannot be scoffed or taken lightly. As well as investing in projects that bring a huge profit, businesses should spend money on environmental campaigns, charitable donations or education initiatives. For example, businesses should establish an environmental policy that limits the amount of waste that factories dumping into the environment. Also, the manager and boss should treat their employee well, rather than exploiting them.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that besides making money, businesses have a wider role in society which is the core of long-term success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58558558559 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02637004883 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.2979648273 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.727272727 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1818181818 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223500771138 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824356899673 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523683693893 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134628553669 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324043377941 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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