Currently, companies pay a lot of attention to making money. Besides it, I agree that they should also have social responsibilities.
Firstly, I will discuss the importance of making money. We all know that the more money the companies make, the more taxes they pay. These taxes can be used by the government to spend on public services like hospitals, schools,… to improve them. We can see it in the case of Viettel, which is the most developed company about post and telecommunication make billions dong per year and the taxes it pays is used to build schools in Vietnamese remote area, which help the children from there a lot with there study. Besides it, businesses can expand and also provide more jobs for everyone. That means that the companies need more employees for their missing positions.
Secondly, social responsibilities are important. If the companies do not take care of the environment, it can be destroyed. To be more specific, the companies can contaminate the environment by disposing of waste, which can lead to more serious problems like air and water pollution or global warming and affect the human body in the future. Therefore businesses need to handle the waste before disposal out to the environment. Businesses that make profits should also put money back into the community through charity and financing scholarships. For example, Vinamilk, a milk corporation that affords lots of scholarships for students every year and has funds for people who live in bad conditions and need help
For these reasons, I show that businesses are responsible for both making money and supporting social
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08239700375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92159799183 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3701443279 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236582209956 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923885558629 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728481302168 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189774115224 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732934969734 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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