as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
As economies have grown exponentially to a degree that there is certain imbalance between the welfare of society and its wealth, it is argued that companies should be responsible for the well-being of society, in addition to generating profit. Although many businesses would regard this a burden, in the long-term doing this can help build an economic climate conducive to the sustainable development of businesses.
it is widely believed that the responsibility for addressing social maladies lies strictly with the government. This is simply because only the authorities have human and financial resources as well as legislative power to combat substantive problems, such as unemployment rate, pollution or crime rates, all of which are apparently beyond a company’s capabilities. Furthermore, should an establishment be compelled to remedy such problems by, for example, contributing more than their income tax, they will likely deem this as an appropriation of their capital, thus being extremely reluctant to do it, or even trying to evade such vital social obligations.
Nevertheless, in fact there is numerous scientific evidence proving that by fulfilling its civic duty, businesses have created solid foundations for their further growth. To illustrate this, were a business to forgo its employees’ benefits and the integrity of environment, in which it is functioning, for its economic gains, then the employer would highly anticipate not only a high turnover but also environmental lawsuits with the result that the business would be made unviable. In contrast, when they can obtain the equilibrium between economic expansion and the well-being of people and nature, not only do they thrive in a stable environment but also become an attraction to highly competent workers. It should, however, be of note that such social accountability should be made manageable so as not to hinder a company’s growth.
in conclusion, the concerns over the loss of gains should not be allowed to discourage businessmen from fighting for a good cause, which will profit society as a whole. Otherwise, a society could be at a risk of instability.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...stainable development of businesses. it is widely believed that the responsibil...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... an appropriation of their capital, thus being extremely reluctant to do it, or e...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...s not to hinder a company’s growth. in conclusion, the concerns over the loss ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41964285714 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17026597944 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.72132466 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.545454545 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1818181818 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135650749161 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525472929058 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300113275804 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800685732551 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470598001741 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...stainable development of businesses. it is widely believed that the responsibil...
^^
Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... an appropriation of their capital, thus being extremely reluctant to do it, or e...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...s not to hinder a company’s growth. in conclusion, the concerns over the loss ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41964285714 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17026597944 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.72132466 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.545454545 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1818181818 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135650749161 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525472929058 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300113275804 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800685732551 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470598001741 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.